Sample Direct Response Sales letter for coaching/bootcamp for dating niche
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*****Salesletter begins here******
What if i told you everything the society has told you about
women is completely wrong and what is shown in the mainstream media about women and relationships is absolute bullshit
and will drastically hinder your success with women
what if i told you , to get the women of your dreams, you didnt have to
be super rich
look like a greek model
have oodles of cash
workout for years and years
have super cool connections all over
Sure, these can help , but it's not necessary.This is what is thought to be the truth
propogated by the mainstream media and society believes you to be .Often these truths are used against you
Well, has there been a time in your life when you would have given everything you had in your heart
to a woman, you swear you could have done anything for her. you would have put in your time, energy and love
only to find out to be not responded with the same in kind . Your intentions were good and your heart was pure,
but somehow the other person failed to recognize it.
Ater going through the course, you are going to discover the secrets to get the women you desire,
a secret that has been kept out of the radar of the society, that once you harness, that will
exponentially increase and improve the responses you are getting from the women you desire
You are not alone. I have been there too.I know it's painful. We have all been there
But let me tell you something, you are not alone in this journey, for before in my
life, i have been there too, if not worse. I know what it's like
There I was, It was the final class before the board exams[some heart breaking story
about some chic]"Thanks for the chemistry notes xxxxx" she smiled and handed me the notes back.
I stood there with a blank expression as she reached into her bag with her iphone ringing..
"Yes xxxxxx, I'm coming down in a sec"
I stood there as I saw the love of my life on the last day of the tuition class we were in
It had beeen two years
I sttod there as I saw her rush out , and I stood there watching her walk out for the very
last time
You see, I has joined these tuition classes and there was this girl
Yes, that chic that handed me my chemistry notes back.
I had waited for the right moment far too long...
I had been playing the play it cool, being a gentleman for far too long
"Oh , I'll see her in the class tomorrow anyway "
- I used to say to myself as I let every single class for the semester pass me by
I wondered where I went wrong
Now, the problem was I was I was in love with this girl and had made her the centre of my
life and put her up on a pedestal. "One-itis" as they call it- trying to get that
one girl to fall in love with you . The problem is , If you get too invested in someone in a relationship
you already lose. The neediness comes off in your relationship. It certainly did in mine.
"I have had it"- I said to myself, as i began on my quest. I thought I wasn't enough, as I
skimmed through the heaps of personal development and motivational stuff on my computer
audio programs, positive thinking, motivation , goal setting.. I had tried them all
Now, The 2000's were much simpler times, we didn't have instagrams, snapchats etc
we had EMAIL, we used to forward stupid jokes and images till they got tired
And for those of us whose classmates stop responding to our emails, we started
subscribing to every email list we could , Heck, let I let anyone and everyone
send me stuff.
It was a good feeling to get those notifications and unread
emails , though spam, I got a good feeling, something akin to what an
instagram model girls when they open their account. Man, was I loving
the attention
One fine morning as I was, checking my emails before school, I was reading an email about a guy
who told me about a secret dating blackbook. I was interested right away
I had no money around at that time but I read through his entire website
There was a free ebook that he offereed, I went through that ebook the next night
I had read the book cover to cover, I tried to apply it, I tried it out
The response I was getting from the girls was phenomenal,
Well, some might not feel it phenomenal, but I had never in my life
had a girl beg me to give me her phone number
A few weeks later, I realized, It wasn't my fault, I didn't know about these
secrets before.I rushed to my email inbox and I tried to find the website
I immediately bought the course with the money I had for my school trip
and printed them out in case the site might go down.
It started to dawn on me, it wasn't really my fault. It isn't really
our fault as men .There wasn't really anyone around to tell me all this
Stuff like this , though highly important is not talked about in TV or
Newspapers.
It's deemed "uncomfortable" and "politically incorrect"
to talk about it even though women have several magazines and group
of friends with whom they talk about this and share their experiences
We , as men don't do it as often
After I realized the behaviours and mindsets that were holding me back
due to the unfair societal conditioning . The responses I was getting
from women were out of my reality. It was like playing life with cheatcodes
on. Sure there were people doing it naturally, but they themelves had no
clue what they were doing .
I was in control.
[Insert Case study/testimonial here]
I realized my failure with women was also affecting the other areas of my
life. A lot of the decisions that I took in my life were based on getting
their validation . You might think it is weird, but like it or not,
every man's decision is related to how much closer it might get them to
women. Once I no longer cared for their validation, I was a free man
For years , i had been watching these romantic movies about how, one day
,If I mustered up enough courage to tell my sweetie how I really felt about her
that how, with all my heart , soul and sincerity told her how much I really
loved her , that how, with all my heart,soul and sincerity told her how much
I really loved her and logically "convince" her, that all the feeings I have
been feeling for her would somehow miraculously manifest into her body and she will
start feeling the same wholesome and unconditional love for me . Looked great on the
silver screen. The real life was far from it.
The real problem that I found was it was these, fucked up beliefs that were holding
me back from getting the results I wanted . Imagine having to race a car with your
handbrakes on. You can go ahead and make the aerodynamics like a jet, the engine
state of the art. But running around in that car will hinder your performance,
will make it slower , and eventually will bring it to a halt.It's often the
things that hold us back hinders us more
And that is why I have com up wih the RDS System , in which I , Through years of
my trial and failure ,after going through all the materials I could grab on my
hands on , and trying to experiment with what I learnt on real people . You my
friend, would not have to go through my trials and failures .Your learning curve will
be drastically shortened dut to this
A.Unconcious Incompetence
B.Concious Incompetence
C.Concious Competence
D.Unconcious Competence
My goal with this program is to get you to progress from A to B to C to D
as fast as possible .Sure you might eventually figure some stuff that I teach you
on your own, or you might already have , brilliant!, I am a guy who has gone
through the same failures and frustrations as you have ,
and if I could do it , from the position I had started in , I am sure you can
make use of these skills to the next level with this
So ,how would you like to
>stop getting stuck and not knowing to say to a woman when you see her
>know the reason why what you have been doing not working and what are those
>Start taking control of your interactions with women you desire and deserve
>Get to know of the things to say , and keep the conversation going when
you have run out of things to say
>Finally have the freedom to go talk to women and have them in your life because
you chose them and not because they chose you
>Destroy all the time wasted worrying,thinking and regretting over the past, and
finally start taking action in the right direction
[insert testimonial/social proof here]
But, before we get started, let me ask you a question..
How would you like to get access to everything inside the mind of a pick up artist,
of someone who will walk you through a step by step procedures...
Now, while it may be impossible to show you all the benefits of the RDS Elite System
I want to show you some of the things as soon as you are on the inside
3 Day bootcamp where I will be taking you through all the concepts
and solving all your sticking points
[insert video of bootcamp of doubt solving]
Along with this, A bonus Audio recording of all my existing podcasts and my
future odcasts
A bonus Ebook compilation of all posts on
Social Media and various channels
Private Access to my Elite Mastermind group on facebook
Special Discounts on my future Bootcamps and Coaching Sessions
[more ebooks ]
If all this would give you the women of your dreams, what would it be worth
to you?
If all it did for you was get rid of the loneliness every single night,
what would it be worth to you?
I know the pain, I have been there too, that is why I want this message to reach as many
people as possible, that's why
for my next bootcamp , I am going to charge you $xxxx only instead of the usual $xxxxx
I want you to win
Honestly,My marketing person is going to be really pissed at be for allowing such rates
He had accuseed of be vastly undercharging for my services and wanted me to increase the
prices already..
Now I wanted to offer you this sweet deal for you and some of my other other clients
unable to attend the previous seminars due to reasons beyond their control
Also, I wanted to do this because I love teaching ..
Heck I would have given the seminar for free but I don't wan to take away from you the
effort and seriousness towards something that really has the potential to change your life
Just Imagine what life would be like when when you have such an abundance that the next
time some chic threatens to leave you, doesn't responds to your texts on time or gives
you shit , you would rather, just go out and get another hotter girl than bothering with all
that trouble... Now, you don't have to if you don't want to , But you will always be having
that choice
[CTA Box]
So, Just click on the button below right now, and you will be taken to a seure order form,
where you can give us your details for us to check if you are eligible for this and
wheather if it's right for you or not
We want to make sure if this is the right match for you or not ..
If it's not something we are offering or something I might not be able to help you with..
(psychological issues/severe depression/Asbergers), I ight recommend you to someone who
might help you...
P.S.:This is prbably the last time I am doing this seminar at such low prices and we really
do have a limited seats. Psst.. Don't let my marketing guy know about this sweet deal I am
offering or he is going to annoy me to the point of changing it back
P.S.S. : I know you are going to spend that money anyway,why not spend it on yourself..
******SalesLetter ends here******
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